Name: Ahmad Firdaus
Class: 1E1
Date:4 Feb 2014
draft 3


   Hello. I am going to share my struggles in Primary and secondary school to you. My struggles in Primary school is with my subject English and Mathematics. English is a tough subject for me because I have to memorize difficult words that is dished out by my English teacher. I overcome it when that very one day, my teacher told me to memorize the notes that was given to me from my teacher and I memorize it carefully for the exam to test if I am ready for PSLE, the final exam. I passed the test and have good grades for English.


   For mathematics, there is good and bad things about it. Want to find out about it? Come, I will share with you. The good things about it is that i love the chapters of ratio, percentage and angles. the bad things is most of the chapter are not interesting and fun. There are even question that is given out by my teacher in primary school that is very difficult than i thought.stucked to that question until I never do the rest. I can't do it and i copied from my friend in the morning before assembly. Then, i realized that I have very bad grades for mathematics and decided to improve it.


    After a few weeks later, there is a exam called CA1 test me in maths Then, they announce the score for the students who take the exam. To my astonishment, i got a high B for it. I was very suprised and can't expect it. Starting from that day, I been doing well for maths. My secondary school struggles is that there is too much homework that i can't even handle. I also need to sleep early before school starts. That's all I want to say. Thank you for your attention.

PACC assignment draft 2

Name: Ahmad Firdaus

class: 1E1

Date: 1 February 2014

draft 2

   Address: BLK 984
   Hougang ave 8 
   #10-764
   Singapore 560984

Dear Martin

                  How are you? How's it going?Having a great time studying at England? I hope you are fine. I'm here to tell you about Little India riot happening at Singapore. At the eighth of December before 9.23 pm, a private bus runs over a man who was thirty-three years old named Sakthivel Kumalavelu at the junction of race course road and Tekka lane. After a few minutes later, the police and Singapore Civil Defence Force (SCDF) was informed of serious road accident.

                  After around seven minutes, the ambulance arrived. Then, the police arrived at the scene and block the area.  Just a minute later, the fire-fighters arrived at the scene. Within a blink of an eye, the crowd swells up to 400 people. The dead body of a worker was extricated from under the bus. The mob has started and pelting emergency officers with concrete blocks and beer bottles.

                  The police calls for Special Operations Command (SOC) to arrive. They force the crowd to disperse. After that, police take control of the scene. High visibility patrols deployed to prevent rioters from regrouping. 28 suspects was arrested. 

                 At the ninth of December, Prime minister Lee Hsien Loong orders committee of inquiry into cause of unrest. The second home affairs minister Iswaran announce temporary ban of alcohol sales in Little India.The next day, eight more suspect was arrested for alleged involvement in riot. twenty-four indian workers, aged between 22 and 40, are charged in court. The very next day, the police says three more indian workers are charged in court too.

                 I hope u fine and come back to Singapore soon, OK? Can't wait to see u here.Please send my regards to your parent. please reply to me back soon.

Yours truly

 Ahmad firdaus

Name: Ahmad Firdaus
Class: 1E1
Date:4 Feb 2014
draft 2
 

   Hello. I am going to share my struggles in Primary and secondary school to you. My struggles in Primary school is with my subject English and Mathematics. English is a tough subject for me because I have to memorize difficult words that is dished out by my English teacher. I overcome it when that very one day, my teacher told me to memorize the notes that was given to me from my teacher and I memorize it carefully for the exam to test if I am ready for PSLE. I passed the test and have good grades for English.


   For mathematics, there is good and bad things about it. Want to find out about it? Come, I will share with you. The good things about it is that i love the chapters of ratio, percentage and angles. the bad things is most of the chapter are not interesting and fun. There are even question that is given out by my teacher in primary school that is very difficult than i thought. I can't do it and i copied from my friend in the morning before assembly. Then, i realized that I have very bad grades for mathematics and decided to improve it.


    After a few weeks later, there is a exam called CA1 test me in maths Then, they announce the score for the students who take the exam. To my astonishment, i got a high B for it. I was very suprised and can't expect it. Starting from that day, I been doing well for maths. My secondary school struggles is that there is too much homework that i can't even handle. That's all I want to say. Thank you for your attention.

struggles and how to overcome it draft 2

Name: Ahmad Firdaus
Class: 1E1
Date:4 Feb 2014
draft 2


   Hello. I am going to share my struggles in Primary and secondary school to you. My struggles in Primary school is with my subject English and Mathematics. English is a tough subject for me because I have to memorize difficult words that is dished out by my English teacher. I overcome it when that very one day, my teacher told me to memorize the notes that was given to me from my teacher and I memorize it carefully for the exam to test if I am ready for PSLE. I passed the test and have good grades for English.


   For mathematics, there is good and bad things about it. Want to find out about it? Come, I will share with you. The good things about it is that i love the chapters of ratio, percentage and angles. the bad things is most of the chapter are not interesting and fun. There are even question that is given out by my teacher in primary school that is very difficult than i thought. I can't do it and i copied from my friend in the morning before assembly. Then, i realized that I have very bad grades for mathematics and decided to improve it.


    After a few weeks later, there is a exam called CA1 test me in maths Then, they announce the score for the students who take the exam. To my astonishment, i got a high B for it. I was very suprised and can't expect it. Starting from that day, I been doing well for maths. My secondary school struggles is that there is too much homework that i can't even handle. That's all I want to say. Thank you for your attention.

story of a soccer gloves draft 4 final

draft 4                       Story Of A Soccer Gloves

   "Hey, Patrick, u never thought of having an owner,do you?" My friends mocked as almost all of them was bought by people. Oh... did I introduce myself? Hi, my name is Patrick and I am a soccer gloves. Actually,I am a recycled soccer gloves. I was used by a owner who was as wicked as a witch.Till this day, I always thought of bad thoughts like devil. Do you want to hear my story? Let me share with you.

   One fine afternoon, while the sun was blazing meticulously through earth, I was used by Jose's brother for a very important soccer match which is the finals. All of Jose's brother teammates fought mercilessly like a swarm of bees protecting their honeys. Before half-time which is forty-five minutes, they were down by two goals. By that time, they were almost broke down to tears. After the half-time is over, Jose's brother teammates fought with all their might. After all their hard work, it's finally paid off. They were overjoyed and was jumping like a happy kangaroo. 

  Out of the blue, he threw me away without even thinking twice as I am still in good condition. He did not even care and loved as apart of his family. I felt so sad and broke down to tears like a baby. Inside the garbage, there were smelly socks and shoes that were thrown by him too. So, I was not alone.

 Then, one thoughtful people found me and fixed me. After a few days later, I was sold back. I feel so happy of the thoughtful owner who thought of me. But the sad thing is that it is my old shop before I was sold. 

   Then, all my friends was still there. Still haven't been sold. I feel so sad for them. They were in sad faces. They were like my best friends last time but now, they were playing without me.

   Then,I learnt a valuable lesson to know that we must be careful of whatever we take. We should not waste money on the things we do not like or unnecessary things. 

story of a soccer gloves draft 3

draft 3                     Story Of A Soccer Gloves

   "Hey, Patrick, u never thought of having an owner,do you?" My friends mocked as almost all of them was bought by people. Oh... did I introduce myself? Hi, my name is Patrick and I am a soccer gloves. Actually,I am a recycled soccer gloves. I was used by a owner who was as wicked as a witch.Till this day, I always thought of bad thoughts like devil. Do you want to hear my story? Let me share with you.

   One fine afternoon, while the sun was blazing meticulously through earth, I was used by Jose's brother for a very important soccer match which is the finals. All of Jose's brother teammates fought mercilessly like a swarm of bees protecting their honeys. Before half-time which is forty-five minutes, they were down by two goals. By that time, they were almost broke down to tears. After the half-time is over, Jose's brother teammates fought with all their might. After all their hard work, it's finally paid off. They were overjoyed and was jumping like a happy kangaroo. 

  Out of the blue, he threw me away without even thinking twice as I am still in good condition. He did not even care and loved as apart of his family. I felt so sad and broke down to tears like a baby. Inside the garbage, there were smelly socks and shoes that were thrown by him too. So, I was not alone.

 Then, one thoughtful people found me and fixed me. After a few days later, I was sold back. I feel so happy of the thoughtful owner who thought of me. But the sad thing is that it is my old shop before I was sold. 

   Then, all my friends was still there. Still haven't been sold. I feel so sad for them. They were in sad faces. They were like my best friends last time but now, they were playing without me.

   Then,I learnt a valuable lesson to know that we must be careful of whatever we take. We should not waste money on the things we do not like or unnecessary things. 

   

316 words

story of a soccer gloves draft 2

draft 2                     Story Of A Soccer Gloves

   "Hey, Patrick, u never thought of having an owner,do you?" My friends mocked as almost all of them was bought by people. Oh... did I introduce myself? Hi, my name is Patrick and I am a soccer gloves. Actually,I am a recycled soccer gloves. I was used by a wicked owner. Do you want to hear my story? Let me share with you.

   One fine afternoon, while the sun was blazing meticulously through earth, I was used by Jose's brother for a very important soccer match which is the finals. All of Jose's brother teammates fought mercilessly. Before half-time which is forty-five minutes, they were down by two goals. By that time, they were almost broke down to tears. After the half-time is over, Jose's brother teammates fought with all their might. After all their hard work, it's finally paid off. 

  Out of the blue, he threw me away without even thinking twice as I am still in good condition. He did not even care and loved as apart of his family. I felt so sad and broke down to tears. Inside the garbage, there were smelly socks and shoes that were thrown by him too. So, I was not alone.

 Then, one thoughtful people found me and fixed me. After a few days later, I was sold back. I feel so happy of the thoughtful owner who thought of me. But the sad thing is that it is my old shop before I was sold. 

   Then, all my friends was still there. Still haven't sold. I feel so sad for them. They were in sad faces. They were like my best friends last time but now, they were playing without me.

   Then,I learnt a valuable lesson to know that we must be careful of whatever we take. We should not waste money on the things we do not like or unnecessary things. 

   

316 words

PACC asignment draft 1

Name: Ahmad Firdaus

class: 1E1

Date: 1 February 2014

draft 1


Dear Martin

                  How are you? How's it going?Having a great time studying at England? I hope you are fine. I'm here to tell you about Little India riot happening at Singapore. At the eighth of December before 9.23 pm, a private bus runs over a man who was thirty-three years old named Sakthivel Kumalavelu at the junction of race course road and Tekka lane. After a few minutes later, the police and Singapore Civil Defence Force (SCDF) was informed of serious road accident.

                  After around seven minutes, the ambulance arrived. Then, the police arrived at the scene and block the area.  Just a minute later, the fire-fighters arrived at the scene. Within a blink of an eye, the crowd swells up to 400 people. The dead body of a worker was extricated from under the bus. The mob has started and pelting emergency officers with concrete blocks and beer bottles.

                  The police calls for Special Operations Command (SOC) to arrive. They force the crowd to disperse. After that, police take control of the scene. High visibility patrols deployed to prevent rioters from regrouping. 28 suspects was arrested. 

                 At the ninth of December, Prime minister Lee Hsien Loong orders committee of inquiry into cause of unrest. The second home affairs minister Iswaran announce temporary ban of alcohol sales in Little India.The next day, eight more suspect was arrested for alleged involvement in riot. twenty-four indian workers, aged between 22 and 40, are charged in court. The very next day, the police says three more indian workers are charged in court too.

                 I hope u fine and come back to Singapore soon, OK? Can't wait to see u here.Please send my regards to your parent. please reply to me back soon.

Yours truly

 Ahmad firdaus